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« on: February 10, 2007, 12:49:34 AM » |
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This is my first map, the working title is behavioural research it is supposed to be an underground lab studying the aliens with the hopes of finding a way to defeat them, however they escape and run amok. Currently at early alpha release with a lot of work needed. Please feel free to make comments. (no more spam though) -------------------------------------------------------------------------- Alpha 1 is now released. There is still lots to be done I know but while it may not look pretty yet, the basic layout is good. Please give me some feedback. Alpha 1 release: http://www.mediafire.com/?dhy3hnw5nze------------------------------------------------------------------------- Known issues and to-do list: General: *Concrete textures need sorting, it is a mish mash of different samples at the moment *Information on walls (big text with 'elevator room' (for example) and arrows giving directions) Corridors: *Very generic at the moment in need of trim and decoration, pipes wires etc. *Corners of corridors need reworking *pillars need respacing Human Base: *Needs decorating to look like either 1) Armoury 2) Equiment room 3)locker room *Doors need sorting. Alien Base: *Ramps need re-doing, they don't meet up properly *needs more trim Obervation Deck: *needs trim and deco computer screens buttons which look like they do things etc. Main Lab (room with lots of doors and big contamination notice) *needs more trim, lights etc. *lots of monitors showing alert status needed. Elevator Room: *needs elevator control panel (just for show) *needs a few monitors showing alert status Overmind Access Stairs: *endless amount of work needed here Tell me if you think anything needs adding to my to do list. -------------------------------------------------------------------------- Alpha 1 release: http://www.mediafire.com/?dhy3hnw5nze-------------------------------------------------------------------------- Here are a few screenies (new and up to date):       
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« Reply #1 on: February 10, 2007, 01:13:26 AM » |
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It looks good to me. I think this map definitely has potential! You are right about needing detail, but that can be added in later.
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« Reply #2 on: February 10, 2007, 01:49:18 AM » |
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I'm actually currently making a map with the same concept, it's called ADOC. http://tremulous.net/phpBB2/viewtopic.php?t=3428But it doesn't quite have the same feel, and it is far from completion. Looks good so far. Good luck 
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« Reply #3 on: February 10, 2007, 02:36:58 AM » |
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looks decent for the early stages of a first time map
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« Reply #4 on: February 10, 2007, 02:59:21 AM » |
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Looks good Obi, Keep up the good work!!! :p
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« Reply #5 on: February 10, 2007, 03:00:45 AM » |
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Looks good ObiWan, May the force be with you!!! :p fixed
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« Reply #6 on: February 10, 2007, 03:04:52 AM » |
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Looks good ObiWan, May the force be with you!!! :p fixed i am stalkar you.
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« Reply #7 on: February 10, 2007, 03:06:09 AM » |
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Looks good ObiWan, May the force be with you!!! :p fixed i am stalkar you. oO
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« Reply #8 on: February 10, 2007, 03:08:03 AM » |
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Looks good ObiWan, May the force be with you!!! :p fixed i am stalkar you. oO quoot spam ftw
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« Reply #9 on: February 10, 2007, 03:15:54 AM » |
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Looks good ObiWan, May the force be with you!!! :p fixed i am stalkar you. oO quoot spam ftw mine is teh bettar
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« Reply #10 on: February 10, 2007, 03:16:38 AM » |
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Looks good ObiWan, May the force be with you!!! :p fixed i am stalkar you. oO quoot spam ftw mine is teh bettar i bite my thumb in your general direction
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« Reply #11 on: February 10, 2007, 03:19:17 AM » |
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Looks good ObiWan, May the force be with you!!! :p fixed i am stalkar you. oO quoot spam ftw mine is teh bettar i bite my thumb in your general direction rawr
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« Reply #12 on: February 10, 2007, 03:20:23 AM » |
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Looks good ObiWan, May the force be with you!!! :p fixed i am stalkar you. oO quoot spam ftw mine is teh bettar i bite my thumb in your general direction rawr i do say ol chap your pants are rather big LOL
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« Reply #13 on: February 10, 2007, 03:22:30 AM » |
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Looks good ObiWan, May the force be with you!!! :p fixed i am stalkar you. oO quoot spam ftw mine is teh bettar i bite my thumb in your general direction rawr i do say ol chap your pants are rather big LOL no1 understands that
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« Reply #14 on: February 10, 2007, 03:23:08 AM » |
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Looks good ObiWan, May the force be with you!!! :p fixed i am stalkar you. oO quoot spam ftw mine is teh bettar i bite my thumb in your general direction rawr i do say ol chap your pants are rather big LOL no1 understands that of cours not i dont think the author even found it funny
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« Reply #15 on: February 10, 2007, 03:25:01 AM » |
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Looks good ObiWan, May the force be with you!!! :p fixed i am stalkar you. oO quoot spam ftw mine is teh bettar i bite my thumb in your general direction rawr i do say ol chap your pants are rather big LOL no1 understands that of cours not i dont think the author even found it funny I think the author needs help
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« Reply #16 on: February 10, 2007, 03:26:14 AM » |
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Looks good ObiWan, May the force be with you!!! :p fixed i am stalkar you. oO quoot spam ftw mine is teh bettar i bite my thumb in your general direction rawr i do say ol chap your pants are rather big LOL no1 understands that of cours not i dont think the author even found it funny I think the author needs help i think this quote spam is coming along quite nicely
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« Reply #17 on: February 10, 2007, 03:27:43 AM » |
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Looks good ObiWan, May the force be with you!!! :p fixed i am stalkar you. oO quoot spam ftw mine is teh bettar i bite my thumb in your general direction rawr i do say ol chap your pants are rather big LOL no1 understands that of cours not i dont think the author even found it funny I think the author needs help i think this quote spam is coming along quite nicely hai
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« Reply #18 on: February 10, 2007, 03:29:03 AM » |
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Looks good ObiWan, May the force be with you!!! :p fixed i am stalkar you. oO quoot spam ftw mine is teh bettar i bite my thumb in your general direction rawr i do say ol chap your pants are rather big LOL no1 understands that of cours not i dont think the author even found it funny I think the author needs help i think this quote spam is coming along quite nicely hai www.hai2u.cm
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« Reply #19 on: February 10, 2007, 03:33:20 AM » |
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Looks good ObiWan, May the force be with you!!! :p fixed i am stalkar you. oO quoot spam ftw mine is teh bettar i bite my thumb in your general direction rawr i do say ol chap your pants are rather big LOL no1 understands that of cours not i dont think the author even found it funny I think the author needs help i think this quote spam is coming along quite nicely hai <insert> bannage ^ oh, and btw, hai is japanese for yes
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« Reply #20 on: February 10, 2007, 03:35:33 AM » |
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Looks good ObiWan, May the force be with you!!! :p fixed i am stalkar you. oO quoot spam ftw mine is teh bettar i bite my thumb in your general direction rawr i do say ol chap your pants are rather big LOL no1 understands that of cours not i dont think the author even found it funny I think the author needs help i think this quote spam is coming along quite nicely hai www.hai2u.cmbannage ^ oh, and btw, hai is japanese for yes fixed. 
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« Reply #21 on: February 10, 2007, 04:58:21 AM » |
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enough is enough. please stop the useless quote spamming.
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« Reply #22 on: February 10, 2007, 05:08:34 AM » |
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Looks good ObiWan, May the force be with you!!! :p fixed i am stalkar you. oO quoot spam ftw mine is teh bettar i bite my thumb in your general direction rawr i do say ol chap your pants are rather big LOL no1 understands that of cours not i dont think the author even found it funny I think the author needs help i think this quote spam is coming along quite nicely hai www.hai2u.cmbannage ^ oh, and btw, hai is japanese for yes fixed.  ohhhh...it makes a pretty curve.....
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« Reply #23 on: February 10, 2007, 05:43:25 AM » |
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lame "] Looks good ObiWan, May the force be with you!!! :p fixed i am stalkar you. oO quoot spam ftw mine is teh bettar i bite my thumb in your general direction rawr i do say ol chap your pants are rather big LOL no1 understands that of cours not i dont think the author even found it funny I think the author needs help i think this quote spam is coming along quite nicely hai www.hai2u.cmbannage ^ oh, and btw, hai is japanese for yes fixed.  ohhhh...it makes a pretty curve.....
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« Reply #24 on: February 10, 2007, 06:32:55 AM » |
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You people are evil. You totally hijacked his tread 
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« Reply #25 on: February 10, 2007, 12:55:48 PM » |
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I am now getting quite well into creating my first map and would like feedback. It's not very detailed but that will come with time, I just want feedback about the general idea of the map. Idea: An underground lab studying the aliens with the hopes of finding a way to defeat them, however they escape and run amok. Here are a few screenies:       If anyone wants a better look I can package and upload the map, but tbh I think that can wait until I complete at least the whole layout.
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« Reply #26 on: February 10, 2007, 02:23:07 PM » |
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You people are evil. You totally hijacked his tread  That's because these people are retarded.
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« Reply #27 on: February 10, 2007, 04:04:24 PM » |
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map looks good. add more details soon. it looks fun.
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« Reply #28 on: February 10, 2007, 06:29:23 PM » |
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You people are evil. You totally hijacked his tread  That's because these people are retarded. QFT!
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« Reply #29 on: February 11, 2007, 04:59:37 AM » |
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vcxzet: Your giant dretch's baackground color doesn't match with the comment's baackground color, you should make it transparent.
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« Reply #30 on: February 11, 2007, 03:17:24 PM » |
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vcxzet: Your giant dretch's baackground color doesn't match with the comment's baackground color, you should make it transparent. It's transparent, get a real browser.
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« Reply #31 on: March 03, 2007, 04:08:42 PM » |
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I have been working (slowly) on this map and I have completed the basic layout.
Just a little more before I release alpha 1 so you can get a general feel for the map. I expect to release my first alpha either today or tomorrow.
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« Reply #32 on: March 03, 2007, 04:52:27 PM » |
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lame "] Looks good ObiWan, May the force be with you!!! :p fixed i am stalkar you. oO quoot spam ftw mine is teh bettar i bite my thumb in your general direction rawr i do say ol chap your pants are rather big LOL no1 understands that of cours not i dont think the author even found it funny I think the author needs help i think this quote spam is coming along quite nicely hai www.hai2u.cmbannage ^ oh, and btw, hai is japanese for yes fixed.  ohhhh...it makes a pretty curve..... Srry, had to do it  The map's looking good,is the alpha with or without details?
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« Reply #35 on: March 03, 2007, 09:48:03 PM » |
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lame "] Looks good ObiWan, May the force be with you!!! :p fixed i am stalkar you. oO quoot spam ftw mine is teh bettar i bite my thumb in your general direction rawr i do say ol chap your pants are rather big LOL no1 understands that of cours not i dont think the author even found it funny I think the author needs help i think this quote spam is coming along quite nicely hai www.hai2u.cmbannage ^ oh, and btw, hai is japanese for yes fixed.  ohhhh...it makes a pretty curve..... Srry, had to do it  The map's looking good,is the alpha with or without details? Lol, Battle[/size] Granger[/size] Galore!!![/size] Looks good, play it in Dretch Storm. I like the skybox  But plz stop the quotespamming. Its annoying! :wink:
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