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Read June 18, 2009, 04:22:30 AM #0
{7}wrath

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New rant model; WIP. inspired by +OPTIMUS'+ work.







Crits plz.
« Last Edit: June 18, 2009, 04:24:29 AM by {7}wrath »
 
Read June 18, 2009, 04:31:18 AM #1
UniqPhoeniX

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Re: New rant model; WIP. inspired by +OPTIMUS'+ work.
It looks old Sad
Give it some teeth (or use less smoothing), make the body less round and add some real joints on legs.

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Read June 18, 2009, 06:39:20 AM #2
frazzler

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Re: New rant model; WIP. inspired by +OPTIMUS'+ work.
I agree. Looks kind of frail and bendy. Add in some teeth, a sharper jaw, and put some spikes on its joints. If the joints have spikes, it will make it more menacing and it it's legs won't look like play-doh. Besides that, excellent work, +1
 
Read June 18, 2009, 07:16:41 AM #3
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Re: New rant model; WIP. inspired by +OPTIMUS'+ work.
it looks like it is made out of chocolate. and is melting.
 
Read June 18, 2009, 07:45:19 AM #4
mooseberry

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Re: New rant model; WIP. inspired by +OPTIMUS'+ work.
It's also pretty good. Keep improving it!

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Read June 18, 2009, 08:14:37 AM #5
Ellohir

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Re: New rant model; WIP. inspired by +OPTIMUS'+ work.
I think it needs more sharp, arachnid-style claws. And the bendings of the legs should be improved.

Anyway, pretty good job.

 
Read June 18, 2009, 11:17:46 AM #6
CreatureofHell

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Re: New rant model; WIP. inspired by +OPTIMUS'+ work.
The legs need to be larger and closer to the body and the body needs to be raised. like this:  Tyrant

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Read June 18, 2009, 12:38:36 PM #7
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Re: New rant model; WIP. inspired by +OPTIMUS'+ work.
nice work i really like that head! prolly the jaw must be thinner to fit into the mouth when closed (well in the case if they ever close it, what i doubt)
sharpen those curves, so it will be less chocolated :-)
i dont know how zbrush works, but maybe its more easy if you make different parts like jaw, legs, etc separated and then mixing it together.
keep it evolving!

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Read June 18, 2009, 01:36:37 PM #8
{7}wrath

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Re: New rant model; WIP. inspired by +OPTIMUS'+ work.
What do you guys think of the claw elbows? I'm thinking of using the same technique for the leg joints, but I'm not sure.
 
Read June 18, 2009, 03:03:48 PM #9
+ OPTIMUS +

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Re: New rant model; WIP. inspired by +OPTIMUS'+ work.
should be more segmented!

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Read June 19, 2009, 02:22:43 AM #10
{7}wrath

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Re: New rant model; WIP. inspired by +OPTIMUS'+ work.
Glamour shot / new jaw:

New back armor plates:

New claws, i scrapped the detail on the old ones:

They are meant to look like Stannums:

Full Body Pic:


Crits as always appreciated.
« Last Edit: June 19, 2009, 02:25:01 AM by {7}wrath »
 
Read June 19, 2009, 03:40:06 AM #11
mooseberry

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Re: New rant model; WIP. inspired by +OPTIMUS'+ work.
Starting to get there, but the legs need a lot more detail.

Bucket: [You hear the distant howl of a coyote losing at Counterstrike.]

मैं हिन्दी का समर्थन

~Mooseberry.
 
Read June 19, 2009, 03:44:03 AM #12
{7}wrath

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Re: New rant model; WIP. inspired by +OPTIMUS'+ work.
Yeah, I'm saving the legs for last just cos I think they are going to be such a hassle.
 
Read June 19, 2009, 08:35:11 AM #13
Ellohir

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Re: New rant model; WIP. inspired by +OPTIMUS'+ work.
Better. Keep on that way Wink

 
Read June 19, 2009, 10:12:23 AM #14
E-Mxp

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Re: New rant model; WIP. inspired by +OPTIMUS'+ work.
Needs pointy tail O:

Looks quite good.

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Read June 19, 2009, 11:32:34 AM #15
Ellohir

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Re: New rant model; WIP. inspired by +OPTIMUS'+ work.
May someone put captures of an untextured original tyrant to compare?

 
Read June 19, 2009, 01:19:21 PM #16
{7}wrath

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Re: New rant model; WIP. inspired by +OPTIMUS'+ work.
Here, I found a WIP shot of the "Big Mofo" for you guys to compare. http://err-overflow.deviantart.com/art/Big-Mofo-WIP-3-2605860
 
Read June 19, 2009, 07:29:31 PM #17
Winnie the Pooh

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Re: New rant model; WIP. inspired by +OPTIMUS'+ work.
It's good! To criticize, i have only to say that it is pretty bulgy for a terrible tyrant. The legs should be sharper and more clean cut. otherwise gj!

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Read June 19, 2009, 07:49:43 PM #18
amz181

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Re: New rant model; WIP. inspired by +OPTIMUS'+ work.
My only problem is that the torso looks too human like...

Apart from that it looks awesome.

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Read June 19, 2009, 08:17:27 PM #19
Ellohir

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Re: New rant model; WIP. inspired by +OPTIMUS'+ work.
Quote from: {7}wrath on June 19, 2009, 01:19:21 PM
Here, I found a WIP shot of the "Big Mofo" for you guys to compare. http://err-overflow.deviantart.com/art/Big-Mofo-WIP-3-2605860

Wow, texturing does a lot. Can't wait to see your final textured tyrant, must be great for wallpapers and things like that. Anyway, I think that the legs should be more like the claws ^^

 
Read June 20, 2009, 02:10:11 AM #20
{7}wrath

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Re: New rant model; WIP. inspired by +OPTIMUS'+ work.
Tonight's update is on the chest and legs:

UPDATE NEW PIC

worked on the chest plates some more, sharpened the legs, and fleshed out the arm plates.
Crits appreciated.
« Last Edit: June 20, 2009, 02:00:41 PM by {7}wrath »
 
Read June 20, 2009, 06:44:14 AM #21
UniqPhoeniX

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Re: New rant model; WIP. inspired by +OPTIMUS'+ work.
Make the body less fat and add some spikes Tongue Good work so far tho.

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Read June 20, 2009, 05:49:40 PM #22
{7}wrath

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Re: New rant model; WIP. inspired by +OPTIMUS'+ work.
Do you think i should make the crest on the back of his head layered like the origional? or leave as is
 
Read June 20, 2009, 06:02:52 PM #23
Repatition

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Re: New rant model; WIP. inspired by +OPTIMUS'+ work.
As is! the layers look dum!


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Read June 20, 2009, 06:04:53 PM #24
Archangel

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Re: New rant model; WIP. inspired by +OPTIMUS'+ work.
melted chocolate. seriously.
 
Read June 20, 2009, 07:03:14 PM #25
{7}wrath

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Re: New rant model; WIP. inspired by +OPTIMUS'+ work.
I'm blocking out the forms before I add detail. My workflow is FORMS >> RETOPOLOGY >> DETAIL/COLOR >> EXPORT DETAIL TO TEXTURE
 
Read June 20, 2009, 07:07:54 PM #26
Ellohir

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Re: New rant model; WIP. inspired by +OPTIMUS'+ work.
Quote from: Archangel on June 20, 2009, 06:04:53 PM
melted chocolate. seriously.

So... What is this? http://err-overflow.deviantart.com/art/Big-Mofo-WIP-3-2605860

BTW nice update. I liked the spike on the elbow, could you add it? And the arms looking a bit more down? The posing in the original model was just perfect Wink

 
Read June 20, 2009, 07:35:57 PM #27
{7}wrath

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Re: New rant model; WIP. inspired by +OPTIMUS'+ work.
A little before-and-after, just because I enjoy spamming pics so much.
BEFORE:

AFTER:
 
Read June 20, 2009, 10:05:58 PM #28
Ellohir

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Re: New rant model; WIP. inspired by +OPTIMUS'+ work.
I though this spike to be more like an extension of the forearm, like the elbow joint was moved a bit foward, leaving a spike aligned with the forearm. That would look cooler to me Cheesy

Anyway, I think this change has improved the model. Keep on this way ^^

 
Read June 21, 2009, 02:38:03 AM #29
Warp Viper

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Re: New rant model; WIP. inspired by +OPTIMUS'+ work.
Keep in mind detail adds polys? ...Or how ever the Q3 engine renders things.
Tremulous already pushes the bounderies of Q3 as is. I prefered the beefier looking model at the top. Might just need abit of muscle definition and a skin. Could look great, keep it up.

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